Dec 2024
I ******* Miss You.
No performance, no stage.
And I still ******* love you
Love eternal, shattered heart.
Yet, I still ******* love you.
To heal the wounds, mend hurt.
Worlds! To explore!
Your fire, selfish desire!
The fact of the matter is, you ******* hurt me.
I wanted good, For The World!
Understanding. Love.
Solace, honesty.
It feels broken, birth without the ask.
I keep my made-distance.
I might come home, alone.
'Alone', is what I know.
I ******* miss you...
No performance, no stage.
And I still ******* love you
Love eternal, shattered heart.
Yet, I still ******* love you.
To heal the wounds, mend hurt.
Worlds! To explore!
Your fire, selfish desire!
The fact of the matter is, you ******* hurt me.
I wanted good, For The World!
Understanding. Love.
Solace, honesty.
It feels broken, birth without the ask.
I keep my made-distance.
I might come home, alone.
'Alone', is what I know.
I ******* miss you...
In response to:
https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4926900/i-*******-miss-you/
Synopsis
In this deeply emotive poem, 'I ******* Miss You Too.... the author responds to a work filled with longing and remorse by reflecting on their shared pain, love, and separation. Through the use of repetition and direct language, the piece captures a profound tension between enduring affection and the need for self-preservation. It is both a reply and a reclamation, addressing the wounds of the past while affirming the boundaries necessary for healing.
The poem mirrors the structure and rawness of the original, with the refrain "I ******* miss you" anchoring it in shared sentiment. However, it introduces a sharper tone, layering the speaker's longing with accountability and recognition of harm. Themes of love, betrayal, personal growth, and solitude weave throughout, creating a tapestry of complex emotions.
Artist’s Intent:
The author uses 'I ******* Miss You Too....' as both a direct response and a personal declaration. By echoing the phrasing of the original poem, they honor the shared history and mutual longing. However, the work diverges by asserting the speaker’s pain and individuality, addressing the emotional cost of the relationship.
Through lines like "Love eternal, shattered heart" and "You ******* hurt me," the poem confronts the duality of love and pain, emphasizing the difficulty of separating the two. The author's intent is to acknowledge the sincerity of the other person's feelings while holding space for their own truth—specifically the necessity of distance and self-reliance.
Ultimately, the poem serves as an exploration of emotional complexity, refusing simple resolutions. It aims to balance vulnerability and self-protection, offering a window into the challenges of navigating love, loss, and healing. The raw honesty of the piece invites readers to reflect on their own experiences with unresolved relationships and the interplay of connection and independence.
This piece stands as both a dialogue and a declaration, encapsulating the intricate emotions of love, longing, and letting go.
https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4926900/i-*******-miss-you/
Synopsis
In this deeply emotive poem, 'I ******* Miss You Too.... the author responds to a work filled with longing and remorse by reflecting on their shared pain, love, and separation. Through the use of repetition and direct language, the piece captures a profound tension between enduring affection and the need for self-preservation. It is both a reply and a reclamation, addressing the wounds of the past while affirming the boundaries necessary for healing.
The poem mirrors the structure and rawness of the original, with the refrain "I ******* miss you" anchoring it in shared sentiment. However, it introduces a sharper tone, layering the speaker's longing with accountability and recognition of harm. Themes of love, betrayal, personal growth, and solitude weave throughout, creating a tapestry of complex emotions.
Artist’s Intent:
The author uses 'I ******* Miss You Too....' as both a direct response and a personal declaration. By echoing the phrasing of the original poem, they honor the shared history and mutual longing. However, the work diverges by asserting the speaker’s pain and individuality, addressing the emotional cost of the relationship.
Through lines like "Love eternal, shattered heart" and "You ******* hurt me," the poem confronts the duality of love and pain, emphasizing the difficulty of separating the two. The author's intent is to acknowledge the sincerity of the other person's feelings while holding space for their own truth—specifically the necessity of distance and self-reliance.
Ultimately, the poem serves as an exploration of emotional complexity, refusing simple resolutions. It aims to balance vulnerability and self-protection, offering a window into the challenges of navigating love, loss, and healing. The raw honesty of the piece invites readers to reflect on their own experiences with unresolved relationships and the interplay of connection and independence.
This piece stands as both a dialogue and a declaration, encapsulating the intricate emotions of love, longing, and letting go.
