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Nov 1
I felt like the ugly duckling of the school.
My teacher stated stop your complaining.
I want my art true this should be my rule
So check your drawing.then art amazing.

My teacher stated stop your complaining
I struck out at bat .My style waz not sound.
So check your drawing.then art amazing
She meant cast drawing-later I found.

I struck out at bat .My  style was pnot sound
My drawings today exhibit that style.
She meant it was cast drawing-later I found
Showing my teacher my grind juvenile.

My drawings today exhibit that style
I want my art true this should be my rule.
Showing my teacher my grind juvenile
I felt like the ugly duckling of the schoo
Pantoum
Written by
larry mintz  62/M/Nerthus
(62/M/Nerthus)   
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