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Philip Salt
Poems
Sep 20
My Fractal Conversation
We demand terminality. Shrouded and surrounded by unending formality
We embrace practicality. Expounded and hounded by constant criticality
We crank up tonality. Dumbfounded and pounded by loud vocality
We obsess over finality. Compounded and confounded by life's constant banality
So
Why choose endings rather than bendings as we eclipse the path before us?
Why select stopping instead of hopping over the obstacles ahead?
Why so rigid and brittle, in the place of agile and nimble, when navigating the way before us?
Why is noise more important than poise when we find a still and silent moment?
Why waste energy, and remain out of synergy with nature's sweet symphony?
This is still a better poem in my head but now it is slightly improved. The juxtaposition was not working
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Philip Salt
40/M/Canada
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