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Who am I?

by Lastsun

As I walked, I felt the weight of strings Bound to my heart, pulling me back. I cut one free and moved ahead, Yet still, the burden made me slack. Another string I severed with care, And forward I began to tread. With each cut, the load grew light, A smile appearing as I moved ahead. I glimpsed the place I longed to be, But strings once more held me tight. So I cut a few and pressed on still, My smile growing with the light. Nearer now, the goal was close, Yet strings kept tugging, pulling me. I sliced through more and pushed through, Determined, I was almost free. At last, I reached the final step, The place I’d dreamed of, finally in sight. I cut the last string and stepped beyond, A smile wide, yet fading from light. As I stood in the place I sought, A question arose, deep and stark: Who am I now, having shed these strings? In the silence, I wondered, in the dark.
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Published
Sep 12, 2024
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#strings #identity

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