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Donall Dempsey
Poems
Aug 31
LIVING ON THE CEILING
LIVING ON THE CEILING
crisp white sheets
gleam white
I don't even know I'm dead
I'm on the ceiling
like an abandoned
Christmas balloon
the next tick of
the clock goes on with-
-out me
"Hey, it's...kinda groovy being
dead. .!"
an answer without a question
from my fly's eye view
I can see
the doctor has a growing bald spot
there's that nice new nurse
she's so cute
this is her first death
I can see her thinking
her words carved out of the air
"...don'tdiedon'tdiedon'tdie..."
Death is a free ride man
"...goin' all the way?///...sure am!"
"Hop in. . !"
"Ok, everyone stand back..!"
then the pain floods back &
I'm back...****...in this body
"Whoa...we nearly lost
you there good buddy!"
doc scratches his bald spot
the nice new nurse
her tears stop
half way down her cheek
I cursed my luck
I liked living
on the ceiling
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
(Guildford)
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