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a cosmic sonnet

by anaisvionet

If fusty galaxies twirl like Shakespearian poetry, is astrology a tragedy or a comedy? Are there clusters of tumbling uppercase in outer space, the remnants of conceit metaphors that broke up like meteors? My scattered universe is full of orphaned verse. Why do terse alien names all have hyphens? Quatrains swirl in fiery hues across the ecliptic plane, and sonnets streak by, like sparkling comets. Argh! Where’s a pencil - too late - the thought’s gone. Ever lose something essential - cause you couldn’t find a pencil? It’s ok though, it’s not just me and not just you. Black holes are swallowing Haiku too. . . Songs for this: Hypnotized by Fleetwood Mac Theme for a Nude Beach by The B-52's . . I saw a line with something like, “universe of orphaned verse,” in a poem a few days ago. The idea of celestial words rhyming with writing terms ‘mused’ me. I’ve been looking for the author to credit them (hello, computer searches). If you know the guilty party, please let me know. . *No, this is NOT a sonnet, it’s just the name
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22 / F / France
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Written by
anaisvionet
22 / F / France
Published
Aug 9, 2024
Time
2m
Notes

BLT Merriam Webster word of the day challenge 08.08.24:

Fusty = musty, rigidly and old-fashioned.

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