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Chain of thoughts

by joyjoyjoy

One shooting star - And it’s family And the place it is nearing - For a delightful Afternoon tea. Then went - A couple for an evening run - As found a new Lake-side course not too far From home.
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When, for instance, a star passes by do you ever wonder where it is headed? Are we too embedded in society’s way of passing time and age that valuable aspects of individuality and colour are overlooked unduly? When is the last time we thought about something under the surface; something other than perhaps a bolognese cup pasta for lunch…or the answer to the eighth question in last week’s test?

These thoughts don’t come as naturally as wished. Still, talking to those with an experience of musing about these things gifts a colourful experience of deep sensation. And then a next thought comes to mind; which is… will these thoughts actually impose a change and meaningful consequence.

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