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Jun 11
Wise men
Don’t forget
That you father
Gave you a life
So lived
Every single day
I hope you don’t have
Nothing to complain
About you live
Because you father
Gave you a beautiful
Life to live every single day
Here on earth
After he had made you
With his holy hands
Also you should be proud
That you are the oldest child of
You father
Yes you father have lots of children
Also he wants you to live you live to the fullest
Oldest child
And you father hopes that you are not going
To waste you live sleeping in
Because that would be the worst thing to do
Also you father wants you to respect you
Young brothers
And don’t fight with them
Because thaat will be the worst thing you can do
Wise men
Please watch you health
Every day
Because that is important to do
Wised men
You are going to age gracefully every year
And there is nothing that you can’t do about
Wise men
You father hopes that you will not start to
Smoke a joint
Because you will be destroying your life
He wants you to be healthy
Also he hopes that you have a healthy lungs
Also he doesn’t want you to be an alcoholic
And drink like a fish
That is a horrible disease
Because you will be destroying you liver
You father wants to stay sober
I hope that you can promised you father that
Wise men
You father hopes that you will pray also
For him every night before you go to bed
Wised men
Don’t you make friends with the rich people
Because they hate the poor
Also
And it is the wrong crowd to be friends with
Make friends with the poor people
I believe they will appreciate you
Wise men
Please don’t spend you money like it is water
Because you will be broke
Do me a favor save your money
And spend you money wisely
Wise men
You are not going to live forever
I am telling you the truth
Because you father made life that way
Also when you will be in heaven
You will be re united with your loved ones
That died before you
aldo kraas
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aldo kraas  60/M/Toronto
(60/M/Toronto)   
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