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....At Least I Did

The men and women in various colors had left the room

Something about coming back later

The crying woman left too, talking to the man in white

Leaving the girl alone with the man

Who could barely glance her way

Could-d I-I h-have a-a mirror?

Her words came out stammered

Voice rough, raspy, and cracked

Dried up from hardly any use

He looked at her shocked

Whether from the request

Or the fact that she spoke

Finally processing the question, he reached into the woman’s purse

Grabbed a mirror and brought it to her

Along with a cup of water

She smiled softly in reply, took a sip of the water

Then flipped the mirror over and took in the image

More scars

Bandages around her head

Cracked and dried lips

Bruises fading

No stitches, just tape and glue

But what caught the most attention was her brown eyes

They stared back at her

Empty

Blank

No reminiscence of who that was in the reflection

Just a broken girl with no recollection

She stared for several minutes

Trying to figure out the equation

The solution, the answers to all the questions

She needed to remember

Who it was in the mirror

The brown-eyed girl

Lost to this world

She felt a rising emotion swell within her

She saw glazed eyes beginning to shine

As tears spilled out of her eyes

The watery imprints left on her face

As disappointment rang

A stranger gazed back

 

She set the mirror down, clenched her eyes tight

Wanting to erase the image from her mind

Because it was now a memory

A full-fledged memory

Something to recall

Something to remember

And it was of a stranger

Who felt distant and intrusive

Because this girl had a life

And it wasn’t hers anymore

It was someone else’s

Someone who forgot all that made her—her

She had a face, arms, legs, a beating heart

A life that was taken and vanished from sight

In one instant in time

Gone in the blink of an eye

All the memories, the past

Something so vital that made this girl who she was

No longer belonged to her

But to a stranger

Who remembered nothing of the kind

 

Suddenly she felt someone wiping her face and eyes

Dabbing the tears away

She opened her eyes and looked to see the tall man

Standing very close with a tissue in hand

One look into the man eyes and she saw a rawness that tore her apart

Brokenness, so clear and underdone in dark orbs

Tears streamed down his long face

She felt an unfamiliar tug in her heart

On instinct, she gently grabbed his wrist

Took the tissue from his shaking hand

And began to wipe his tears away

He closed his eyes at the gesture

Beginning to sob

As she continued to dab his face

I know who you are

His eyes shot open at the admission

Shock and surprise filled those brown orbs

Followed by hope

You do?

He whispered

Still in shock

She nodded

As more tears sprang to her eyes

I just don’t remember

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Written by
leira
Published
Oct 9, 2013
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Notes

Part II

this is how I imagined something like this, and I hope I have not offended anyone by touching on this, I know people go through this and my prayers go out to those families. It's just fiction, an idea.  I was listening to Coldplay's song "Fix You" and the one line that resonated the most was, "tears stream down your face, when you lose something you cannot replace." I would imagine how hard that would be, because I don't think you can ever replace memories only create new ones. So this is how I sort of dealt with the sudden inspiration to write this. Thanks for reading :)

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