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Donall Dempsey
Poems
Dec 2023
DANCING IN THE SKY
DANCING IN THE SKY
my ancestor
an early Neanderthal
whose name is
something like
a grunt voiced
with open lips
finally makes it
to Heaven
it's taken a long long time
but there are
the Pearly Gates
angels on clouds
harping about
how glorious
it all is
the whole
kit and kaboodle
of tropes
this is not
its idea of
Heaven
Heaven is being
alive in
the here and now
sunshine
on your face
a breeze in your hair
I tell him
it's not my idea either
and we both smile
hold hands
as we walk
back into the past
Written by
Donall Dempsey
Guildford
(Guildford)
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