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Max Neumann
Poems
Nov 2023
The Cave by the Sea
A red path leads to our cave
To a secluded place
Far from everything forgiven
The cave surmounts the sea
Years ago I built it from stone
So you'd place pictures there
Left behind my odor
Among your ***** hair
The cave grew into our lives
Our children were born
The cave is located in Eden
Between sea and heaven
I didn't sense that
So I resisted the cave
Therefore I destroyed our cave
Burnt your hair
You remained in the debris
To rebuild the cave
Soon it smelled of flowers
Friendly with life
Meanwhile I searched the sea
Diving through bitter saltwater
At night it was freezing
Remotely our cave was glowing
Defiantly I was yelling in the sea
Since I wanted to be a great god
Triumphing over the sea
Until I stopped breathing
So I awoke on rocks
The sea was yelling brutally
Blood in my mouth
I had lost this battle
Finally I gave up
Half dead on the ground
Looking at the cave
Our cave by the sea
The Cave by the Sea
Written by
Max Neumann
M/Inner Shelter
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