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Oct 2022
I opened my whole heart to you
like how surgeons open up chests to do surgery
You were the scalpel that sliced my skin wide opened
And there I was on display for your judgement.

That’s what it felt to love someone like you
The rawest form of judgement, no modesty was allowed
not a care, you were just in for a thrill
They say surgeons live to cut
Maybe you and surgeons aren’t that different
Except you didn’t cut me instead
your eyes pierced me
your voice paralyzed me
Your silenced poisoned me
And while I was on my knees
your touch crushed me
sai
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sai  san diego
(san diego)   
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