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Mt. Reverie

I remember it was cold and quiet. We stood up beneath the scattering stars. Silently staring at the landscape outspread in front of us, where the mountain touched the sky. Losing count on the steps taken, you wondered how many dreams townspeople had to reach the summit tower seen from afar; Spreading lights randomly with no purpose to guide. Little yet arrogant. Like a candlestick being put on the top of the world, accidentally. Or maybe, incidentally placed to embody the messiah for those who would discover it that way — which might be peculiarly irrational. Despite the lame fact, it still mesmerized you. I just knew the moment your starry eyes were seen in the dim night. And out of the blue, it captivated me too. We sneaked from the despotic night, releasing laughs from the deepest and most untouched alley in our lungs. Our fears were freed. Nonchalant towards the thing ahead of us, even to the time that felt prematurely withered. "I remember once this priest brought hope to our house, and we just followed him since then", you said. That’s how you told me that miracle wasn’t the thing that kept us living, but hopes that enlightened. Unyielding lost in the most chaotic ecstasy I have ever encountered. It became that moment when a knock on the door wouldn’t be able to break our reverie. Modest. Humble. We then walked unafraid through the open door that led us to the home where the sun rises.
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anggita
Cisgender Female / Indonesian
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Written by
anggita
Cisgender Female / Indonesian
Published
Aug 14, 2022
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#priest#reverie#night#sun#silent#summit#guidance#love#captivation#eyes
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