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better than me

ah, now I see how you really feel

that fake loving surface is starting to peel

i've tried to be the best, all just for you

and i want you to know

I do all I can do

 

but you shove it right back

all in my face

and I think I could see me

somewhat replaced

cause I seem to make it worse

when you need someone most

you'd be better off speaking

to a ******* fence post

 

please dont get me wrong

I love you endlessly

but you seem to deserve

someone better than me.

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sam-martin
American
Published
Jul 19, 2010
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Nothing fancy at all.

Just to the point.

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