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When Caesurae Go Bad
The dramatic pause-dash that - holds its breath Is meant to create a – sense of tension For dramatic effect; that’s what they - say John Wayne uses the - caesura a lot
But since neither writers – nor editors – know How to employ the worthy – caesura They just - shoehorn it in any old place Dramatic effect even in a - recipe
Stop using those dashes for pointless pauses And save them for really important - causes