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Terry Collett
Poems
Sep 2013
SORTING THE BOYS FROM MEN.
It was near Christmas time
and you went along
to see old Pete
who lived alone
in a two up
two down house
not far
from where you lived
he was about 96 or so
and still went
to mass each day
and did the collection
at mass on Sundays
dressed in his best
suit and tie
you knocked
on his door
and after a while
he opened the door
come in
he said
and you followed him
into the main room
where he had a fire going
and sat
in an old armchair
sit down
he said
so you sat
on a chair
beside him
there was a cat
on the mat
in front
of the fireplace
sleeping
want a whisky?
sure
you said
( you used to drink
back then)
the bottle's
in the sideboard
over there
there's a glass
in the kitchen
so you went
to the kitchen
and took a glass
from the draining board
and took the bottle
out of the sideboard
pour yourself a drink
he said
what about you?
you asked
can't drink
I'm on too many pills
ok
you said
and poured
a couple of fingers worth
more than that
he said
what are you
some kind of woman?
so you poured
half the glass
and put the bottle
on the small table
beside you
Pete sipped
his milky tea
well here's to Christmas
he said
and raised
his mug of tea
you raised your glass
and said
here's to you
and you sipped your drinks
he talked of his wife
who had died
some years before
he spoke of his son
(without much affection)
and his grandson
whom he seemed
to speak well of
and his grandson's wife
who he said
was quite pretty
but not as beautiful
as my wife
Pete said
she was one
in a million
he went quiet
he sipped his tea
and you sipped
your whisky
he talked about
his master builder days
when he worked long hours
and over six days
and saved money
where and when
he could
he became silent
my son is always
on the want
he knows
I have money
and he is always
asking
for this and that
he drained
his mug of tea
you drained
your glass of whisky
want another?
he asked
I must be going
you said
have another first
he said
so you poured
more whisky
into the glass
( half a glass again
he having insisted)
and he talked
of the women he knew
and how he teased them
and flirted with them
and made them laugh
you know those old dears
like to be flirted with it
makes them
feel young again
he said
when they laugh
you can see the light
flash in their old grey eyes
and their dead dugs
tremble with memories
and he laughed
and drank
from a bottle
of mineral water
by his armchair
he sat gazing
into the fire
you sat draining
the whisky
from the glass
the room smelt
of cooking meat
and wet cat
and you said
look Pete I best go
the wife will wonder
where I've gone
OK
he said
and so you washed
the glass in the sink
and put the bottle away
in the sideboard
and patted his shoulder
see you around
in church
he said
sure
you replied
and walked swaying
up the road
you'd only went
to Pete's
to wish him well
and to deliver a card
and framed picture
of a female saint
he liked
but the whisky
had been a bonus
a kind of
THANK YOU
for being
a friend
to an old man
it was the sort of gift
you liked back then
the whisky kind
sorting the boys
from men.
Written by
Terry Collett
Sussex, England
(Sussex, England)
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