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Lawrence Hall
Poems
Jan 2022
No, Mr. Sandburg
Lawrence Hall
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No, Mr. Sandburg
The fog doesn’t come on little cat feet
It stinks and slinks across the fields
Maybe Grendel creeps within it -
He wants to eat us before dawn
As a farm boy I found that the bit about fog creeping on little cat feet did not match how I experienced the fog rising across the fields at dusk.
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