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Sep 2021
The Critics...
Ahhh The CRITICS... !!!

So What is it... ???
That Makes Them THINK...
They Can CRITICISE Things...
You Choose To Bring... ?!?

Like LOGICAL Thoughts...
That EXHIBIT MORE...
Than Being A... "Sheep"...
Who Follows The Weak... !!!

They're RARELY Objective...
When It Comes to Collectives...
Who They Choose To BREAK BREAD With... !!!

Because Their Objectives...
Are RARELY... OBJECTIVE... !?!?!

In Fact They're SELECTIVE...
When It Comes To Perspectives...
That EMBRACE The SUBJECTIVE... !?!

I Guess Sometimes...
Within My Rhymes...
And Thought Designs...

That SUCH Insights...
Reflect My Life... ???

But TRUTH Be Told...

I DON'T THINK SO... !!!

See WITHIN My Scripts...
Critiques Take LIKS'... !!!!!

So AREN'T Welcome...
In... CRITICAL Gums...

I'm NO Sherlock...
But U N D O... K N O T S... !!!

Because My Mind Is NOT Consigned...
To Living Life As If I'm... "Blind"...
... When I've GOT SIGHT... ?!!!?

I Have A STRONG MIND...
So Have NO TIME...
To LISTEN To Lines...
That DON'T Sound Right... !!!

"Can't take critique Virge ?
For a man of words,
who speaks on the world,
that seems a little perverse ?"

"Okay, are you done ?
cos' I ain't the one,
to hit with attacks,
that dismiss facts !"

Facts Like THIS...

When You See How I Live...
Do You See Me Enlist...
And Then... PERSIST...
With Things That CLEARLY...
............. Do NOT FIT... ?!?

Like Lyrics in Scripts...
That Make NO SENSE... ?!?

Or... ARGUMENTS...
That Then RESIST... ?

LOGICAL Collections...
of... SUITABLE Directions...

UNLIKE CRITICS...
Who Like To CRITICISE... !!!

Just To STRESS The Minds...
of Those Whose Vibe...
AIN'T Down With LIES... !!!

... I DEAL In TRUTH... !!!

While They Tend To CHOOSE...
...... AIRING Views......

That When PERUSED...
Are FILLED With ABUSE...
They SHOULDN'T Infuse... !!!

Rather Than DEALWith The Artistry...
That They're Supposed To CRITIQUE...

...... " IMPARTIALLY "...... !!!!!!!

CRITICISMS Have Made...
Quite A Few... Give In... !!!

BEFORE Their Beginnings...
Because of... ABUSE...
Some Critics Have Written... !!!

It's The Same Ol' Same...
WHATEVER The Game...

The Game of CONNECTING...
WITHOUT Then INFECTING...
Connections With INFECTIONS...
That Then IMPEDE Progression.

Leaders Now Are MOSTLY FOUL... !!!!!
And Are Being... CRITICISED... !!!!!
Because of What They... "hide"... ?!?

Their GUISE of Being WISE...
And Directing Peoples Lives...
As If... Their Slice of Life...
Does NOT Have Things To Hide... ?!?

TOO MANY People... "Hide"...
BEHIND... OTHER Peoples' Lives... ?!?

THESE People ARE The Types...
Who DON'T Like To Be CRITICISED... !!!!!

I'm GLAD That My Life...
DOESN'T TOE Such Lines... !!!

My Line NOW Is...
That... " Y'all Are Right ! "...

So Right Now I'll Just Write My Scripts...
And CONSTRUCT Rhymes...
That Simply Are... ARTISTIC...

When It Comes To LIFE...
And What Is Said By... CRITICS...

Ahhhhh.....

... " The Critics "... !!!
LISTEN HERE :

From The Album... " The Lowhar Files "...
Available at iTunes and all major online outlets...

https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/5-the-critics-master?in=user-16569179/sets/the-lowhar-files
Big Virge
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Big Virge  Barbados
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