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Looking Back

I hope when you look back

On the life that you lead

That you have regrets

That you're proud that we were brought up well

With good manners and a good temperament

But that you hate the fact

That every time you were mad

For absolutely no reason at all

That every time you went off the wall

And lost it all

You were losing another part of us

 

I hope you're proud

That you gave us the best--

Education, toys, and material things

But recognize

That all we really wanted

Was love, time, and those things

That you can't give back to us now

 

You lost us

It happened a very long time ago

You didn't even realize it

Will you now?

 

Now that you won't be a part of my kids' lives

Or mine after this

Now that I'll get as far away as possible

Just like I couldn't

It'll be a lonely one for you;

I hope you realize it

My only question is:

Looking back on your life

Was it all really worth it?

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Written by
melissa-vance
American
Published
Aug 11, 2013
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Notes

Hey guys,

This poem was really hard for me to write. I know it's rough around the edges. I wanted to post it. I'll come back and edit it later. Commentary is always welcome. Thanks

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