She rises golden from the water The current cradles her memory Her name echoes in the depths And is whispered in the shallows
She moves with grace through nature Which is bettered by her presence And depleted by her passing The animals bow down And stand silent once she’s gone
She is Artemis, Athena She is Helen bathed in starlight She’s the west wind from the desert Bringing promise, bringing change
This was inspired by watching my lovely wife at the Russian River a few years ago. I had lots of problems with this poem because none of the verses wanted to be like the others — I still have a long/extra line in the second verse that refuses to go away. Plus there were fish and slow moving animals in an earlier draft of the poem, but they kindly agreed to leave and await some future opportunity to help out.