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by Closeddoorsandwelcomemats

the sticky taste of metal, lime, cholula, and eventually beer hits my chapped lips as I hide a tender smile watching you fight back tears and laugh at how silly you must be for it while talking about your past, thinking about your future, how hard your dad was on you, the internal war going on in your head telling you to make him proud by surrendering your own happiness. your vulnerability pierced my HEART in that moment, choked me up a little bit; it's been a while since i've seen that level of sincerity in another person. I wanted to freeze time and the people talking around us, reach out a hand, and tell you: you are safe to cry with me.
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