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Aug 2013
Ba
Clouded by cobwebs

these days

you tell the same stories

and ask for news

forgotten by the next clock stroke.



You are no longer the apple peeler

whose hands never faltered

in wielding blade or teacup,

whichever was needed

to cater for me.



Though I bare your name

the syllables slip

and you must grasp

at faces I resemble

in the hope you’ll catch a memory

before it fades for good.



You were seventy-seven at my birth

and yet you stood

in photos with me,

constant in attention and love.



I do not know,

a world without.
Ba is the name that the family gave my Great Grandmother. According to her, she used to walk my pram down by the sheep and say "look at the ba-ba lambs!"
This apparently led to be referring to he as Ba.
The poem contains the same amount of words as years that she has lived so far. The point of this style of poem is that you use a person's age as the word limit for your work.
Carol J Forrester
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Carol J Forrester  25/F/Crewe, England
(25/F/Crewe, England)   
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