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Open Your Eyes

by @ValeLuna

I slept with my door open Footsteps down the hall; Left, right, creak, pause The insides of my eyelids become an abyss Left, right, left, right (faster…) Left, right, left, right (faster!) Left, right, left, right (FASTER!) Left, right; It reaches my door frame The weight vanishes ‒‒ I open my eyes Silence. Like there always has been. I face my open door The heaviness returns ‒‒ my eyes close Creak, right, left, right, pause The void covering my eyes arrives An outline pierces through my sight Left, right… It sits on the edge of my bed “It’s very nice to be invited in, People… remarkably quick to lock me out” A pointed nail drags against my arm “People…” The outline against the abyss reveals a set of claws “Extraordinarily soft people,” The weight is broken through I look around the darkness Silence. Like there always has been. I try to sleep with the door open The heaviness is aggressive this time It’s outline sits, looming over me “I have not been in many rooms, Yours is the most stimulating.” It envelopes my vision I feel a warm breath on my ear “I have always wondered… If the human is still alive when I bite it Will it scream?” I feel a set of razor sharp teeth settle onto my neck I struggle to break through the weight My eyes open Silence. Like there always has been. Who sleeps with their door open? The force closing my eyes swallows me The creature’s outline flops against the black backdrop It’s thorny teeth the only visible facial feature “Before I go, I must request something” It shifts closer to me in bed A whisper speaks, “Look me in the eye.” The weight wrestles me I win by stubbornness When I look around my room, I see Silence. Like there always has been. I tried sleeping with my door open The heaviness hits me like a wave slamming against rocks Along with its teeth, The outline attained eyes Bulging through a skull, littered with cracks “Thank you,” Its blade-like teeth spread “It’s good to know I’m welcome here.” When I awake, I hear Silence. Like there always has been. I look towards my door… It’s closed, Which is odd, because I’m certain I fell asleep with it open.
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ValeLuna
21 / F / Michigan (USA)
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Written by
ValeLuna
21 / F / Michigan (USA)
Published
Apr 15, 2021
Time
4m
Tags
#nightmare#monster#eyes#creature#darkness#abyss#silence
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