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Mar 2021
My lips begin to quiver
with the rhythm of my trembling brain,
Crestfallen & bewildered,
craving all answers,
the truth,
how it can be changed.

I recall all the memories
of a different us,
longing to be together,
doing everything & nothing
to let love flourish.

Moving on is too difficult,
it is impossible to win her back.
I musnt do both,
yet i can not choose.

There is a third option.
for the moment,
for eternity,
reminiscing.

When communication dies out,
when infatuation fades.
promises were broken,
hearts forced to follow.

Our two souls drifted apart,
mine forever chasing.
I long for the love we shared,
for the feelings you gave.

No more memories will be made,
Or moments shared.
intentions of mine stay,
promises of mine kept,

My heart,
forever & ever,
yours.
Hi guys, this is the first poem I've ever written, some criticism would be appreciated. I feel is is a bit wordy and hard to read.
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Jesse Jones
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