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BIG SUR

Making love in the afternoon sun by a creek Smelling roses in the dark, walking a quiet dark road together Hiking over the eucalyptus hill to rip off our clothes and ease into the hot tub, the sea raging below us Listening to the drum circle at the beach bonfire Shaking the glistening water in a mason jar under the full moon Eating a caramel donut, riding a bicycle around the ocean highway, crying Lying on top of my garage, staring at the sky full of stars, crying Watching a bubbling caldron of chili on the mountaintop, the dark waves far below, crying Living in a lean-to by the ocean on El Sur ranch, homeless, crying Packing up my ‘53 bright blue Chevy truck, heading to San Francisco alone, crying
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Written by
judi-romaine
American
Published
Jan 4, 2021
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My years in Carmel and Big Sur were tumultuous, no different than most 20 somethings. But the exquisite beauty of the place stabs my heart.

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