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Jul 2013
in the briar patch of the mind
the rabbit is fat with his pretense
and the web of his thoughts is brazen and garish
they cascade thru me as he hammers at the dull metal
of his treasures
seeking to make true him rich rabbit dream

his brother the sow begins to shout that the hammering
is an appendage of his nightmares
reaching into the depths of his shallow soul
and twisting the heart-meat of his investment banker infested mind

and both rabbit and sow know they
must redouble their effort
to avoid being the centerpiece of the dinner platter
but inΒ Β the briar patch of the mind
its the failing of such grand designs that are the
bread and butter of such feasts
that you and i now wait with such hungers

its a desert of the soul to be certain
no cool thoughts to slake this thirst for the
simple comforts like a woman's hand to hold yours
so we must feed our souls with the scraps
cast aside without care or compassion from the
feast of the tourist trap
but isnt that been our lives far back as we can remember
catching firefly's in the evening rain
and spend the night just watching them with stark wonder
spinning round and round in a jar
looking back we should have just let them roam free
find the own destiny's

i stand here waiting on yet another day of hoping
for that break that will change this
set of dealt cards
for that break of the kid opening the jar
and letting us free to roam the summer free
and let us find a happier destiny
"jane says" LOL...not sure why that particular thing would occur to me that i should have to come back and annotate the poem as such...the janes addiction song is rather oddly not for from being kin to the thought behind this maligned little ditty....jane in the song caught in somthing of a briar patch of the mind as well so to speak...perhaps im being too obtuse...perhaps the thought was simply that jane liked my poem...hence 'jane says'...LOL perhaps im freakin thinkin way to freaking much LOL :-) thanks for shopping k-mark and have a nice day :-)
mark john junor
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