in the briar patch of the mind the rabbit is fat with his pretense and the web of his thoughts is brazen and garish they cascade thru me as he hammers at the dull metal of his treasures seeking to make true him rich rabbit dream
his brother the sow begins to shout that the hammering is an appendage of his nightmares reaching into the depths of his shallow soul and twisting the heart-meat of his investment banker infested mind
and both rabbit and sow know they must redouble their effort to avoid being the centerpiece of the dinner platter but inΒ Β the briar patch of the mind its the failing of such grand designs that are the bread and butter of such feasts that you and i now wait with such hungers
its a desert of the soul to be certain no cool thoughts to slake this thirst for the simple comforts like a woman's hand to hold yours so we must feed our souls with the scraps cast aside without care or compassion from the feast of the tourist trap but isnt that been our lives far back as we can remember catching firefly's in the evening rain and spend the night just watching them with stark wonder spinning round and round in a jar looking back we should have just let them roam free find the own destiny's
i stand here waiting on yet another day of hoping for that break that will change this set of dealt cards for that break of the kid opening the jar and letting us free to roam the summer free and let us find a happier destiny
"jane says" LOL...not sure why that particular thing would occur to me that i should have to come back and annotate the poem as such...the janes addiction song is rather oddly not for from being kin to the thought behind this maligned little ditty....jane in the song caught in somthing of a briar patch of the mind as well so to speak...perhaps im being too obtuse...perhaps the thought was simply that jane liked my poem...hence 'jane says'...LOL perhaps im freakin thinkin way to freaking much LOL :-) thanks for shopping k-mark and have a nice day :-)