Is it dreaded humility Or sense of fear Which force my poems To remain so obscure
Nobody knows Just my hands and eyes 'bout these words that flow From thoughts in my mind
Will they joke and laugh Having fun at my expense Causing tears and pain And rejection to commence
These are the thoughts Which I cannot relieve If only one person In me, would believe
I could open my wings Learn how to fly Show who I am Let others inside
I pray, someday Boldly I'll try 'til then I will write For strangers and I
I have just begun writing poetry, and it makes me extremely nervous to show anyone my work. I suppose that is why I like this site. I can receive feedback from complete strangers while being able to express my inner feelings, which I keep hidden from friends and family.