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Jun 2013
The rain falls as
The flowers bloom
The sun shines as
The night falls

The earth moves as
The space is still
The heart beats as
The flow stops

The eyes close as
The mind opens
The mouth speaks as
The silence remains
I sent this poem to my friend of mine. He was a bit mind-blogged by it so I broke it down for him. Here is how I interpreted it for him:

You need rain in order for flowers to grow. There is always a day and a night. The earth is always busy where as space can have some sort of stillness. You can be alive and not feel. You don't have to see through your eyes to have an open mind. And you can say so much by not saying anything at all.
Kayla Lyn
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