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Jul 2020
A feeling that's so indescribable,
As millions of bubbles circle around me.
A blanket of comfort surrounds me.
The calming, crystal clear blue water,
Serene in all its ways,
Transports me to a place, where stress doesn’t exist.

The water is an escape from the loudness of everyday life.
The sound of silence is often short lived,
But underwater, it’s all that’s there.
Every stroke, every move, is kept underwater.
A wave of protection,
Where my mind is at ease.

Water can be the most compatible friend.
It can’t speak like a normal person,
Yet it listens, and softly replies.
It moves with you, and never abandons.
However, water is even more than this.
It is a feeling that’s so indescribable,
The only way to understand it, is to be with it.
This poem has been entered into the LibraryofAmericanPoetry Contest. It's in the semi finals at the moment, (winners have not been chosen), and will be in their published book, "Together". Let me know what your thoughts are on the poem and any advice you might have.. Have a great day!
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