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The Drinking Age

The legal drinking age is 21

And yet kids in high school still get drunk

The legal drinking age is 21

And yet kids still drink because it’s “cool” or “fun”

The legal drinking age is 21

And yet thousands of kids still die each year

Every year

People are disabling by enabling

Teens that have lives

Enabling, you give underage people

(People that have lives)

You give them easy access to alcohol

You give them what they want

No matter the consequences

You don’t realize

You don’t realize

Or maybe you do

You don’t just supply alcohol you supply addictions

Disabling, you ruin lives

With every bottle you ruin lives

With every glass you ruin lives

With every sip you ruin lives

With every single drop you ruin a life

 

You take an unruly girl

And you turn her into an addicted, hungry, craving, empty

Monster

You take a sister from her family

You take a daughter from her parents

Not just that you take a life

 

You know a drink can do this

It’s a ship in a bottle and drinking is diving right over the edge

Drowning your sorrows

You might as well jump because there are rocks ahead

You know the consequences of allowing alcohol access to your life

It’s dominoes tipping and tumbling towards the end

Spending your time with your only friend- a drink

You know that it will ****

That fiery drink boils in your blood

Blazing, bubbling and blistering

Like fire it burns every tie you have in your life

You know it will change lives

And you know that those lives will not change for the better

 

The legal drinking age is 21

And yet you give kids a way to ruin their lives

The legal drinking age is 21

And yet you defy the laws put in place to better those lives

The legal drinking age is 21

 

And yet you still spike the punch

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Mar 16, 2020
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I wrote this as a slam poem for my tenth grade creative writing class.

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