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Hands Shoot Out

I think we go through this life screaming and hurtling, like a man in a chute, falling. As he dives down this chute, faster and faster, his hands continually shoot out. As if to grab something. Anything. But it’s all so smooth, no breaks no ledges, not foot holds or failsafe’s. Down and down he goes. So desperate he becomes, when he sees the circle of light above him start to shrink and disappear. Watch him screeching, clawing, gnashing, and dying, all to return again to the light he no longer remembers. And while others above him appear bathed in light, he cannot see that they fall just the same; all hands outstretched in apocalyptic pleading. Never once knowing escape was be found at the bottom, not the top.
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May 11, 2013
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