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old

the rattling of the train

on the tracks

that runs right by us,

shakes the core

of the six strings

that once held me together.

 

i feel complete,

laying next to you.

and maybe i,

well maybe i’m wrong.

but this feels right.

 

the creation we

we

bring the world.

the composition

of notes

and love

and exchanging breaths,

the beautiful rhythm

that we share

cannot be fabricated again.

 

there.

i feel safe.

 

hearing you laugh,

(on my behalf)

wether i like it or not,

feels good.

 

like sinking  my teeth

into your bare neck.

like pushing into you,

with pure lust…

 

i feel safe.

 

feeling you,

here,

even if i’m not knowing

enough for

my own comfort..

 

i feel safe.

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May 10, 2013
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