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Sobriquet
Poems
May 2013
Jake
"Hey Critter,"
is how Jake greets me.
About that dude-
he said-
he's a child.
You deserve a world better.
I was telling my
Mate Jake
that you're coming over
and he said
"good."
You don't even know him yet
I said.
Yes but from what I've heard
he said,
he's "good."
So today I was drinking whiskey and juice
and playing pool.
Then we went to a friends house and
watched the boxing.
I don't think
watching people hit each other
is exciting so I
smoked a lot
of cigarettes.
Hey Critter
Jake said,
and I know he's got my back.
Written by
Sobriquet
27/Aotearoa
(27/Aotearoa)
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