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Inspire

I’ve been inching closer and closer to the sun

Mingling with heavy things that leave today in shadow

That hold me down, like a ball and chain

Closer and closer to your submersible opinions

That change quicker than the seasons

When spring wheels around,

I’ll dive into your melted eyes like snow

Because I’m done being trapped and confined

I’m no sample in a jar,

Dead and on display in a biology classroom

These acid raindrops don’t scar me anymore

Now that I’m pursuing my own life

And I owe it all to that boss DJ

Who helped me grow my wings

To fly away with those three little birds

Who glide and sing encouraging words

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Written by
allie-savioli
American
Published
Jun 4, 2010
Lines·Words
16·116
Notes

This is actually inspired by a prompt using song titles. I don't normally like work from prompts but I'm pleased with this piece and I think I used the titles well.

I normally refrain from using the word "thing(s)" but as it was a title I'd chosen, I decided to keep it.

There's 10 song titles in there, if anyone can recognize a few of them.

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