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The Great Unknown

I looked into the gates of Death

That stood just down the path

Reaching out to my soul

Glistening in the sun

And as I stood, enraptured

The air there seemed to say

"Come away

Run with me

No one has to know

It isn't right

You're much too young

I can't bear to see you go."

And so I turned

And ran with it

Raced the wind between the trees

I lost myself there in the woods

Within the greenery

Until one day

I stumbled

The gates stood there with me

Reaching out to my soul

Glistening in the sun

And as I stood there, mystified

A bird sang out to me

"Come away

Fly with me

No one has to know

It isn't right

You're much too young

I can't bear to see you go."

And so I turned

And flew with it

Soared above the clouds

I found a man

Who'd hold my hand

Never let it go

The gates arrived in front of me

Reaching out to my soul

Glistening in the sun

And as I stood there, petrified

My love whispered to me

"Come away

Stay with me

No one has to know

It isn't right

You're mine to save

I can't bear to see you go."

And so I turned

And stayed with him

We raised a boy and girl

Lost into their eyes

I swore, I couldn't leave

They'd never be alone

Then once again those gates appeared

Reaching into my soul

Glistening in the sun

And as I stood, enraged

My children seemed to say

"Come away

Live with us

No one has to know

It's isn't right

We're much too young

We can't bear to see you go."

And so I turned

And lived with them

Watched them grow up, be free

My love and I grew ancient

He lost himself for me

So when those gates showed up again

Reaching into my soul

Glistening in the sun

And as I stood there, ready

I heard the gates true call

"Come away

Die with me

No one has to know

It's finally right

You've lived your life

And now it's time to go."

And so I turned

And died with them

I left the world below

Free of pain and sadness

Into the great unknown.

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May 1, 2013
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