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May 2013
You have mistakes
Not a lot you can do
Seeing you is as seeing the moon
it rises just to resemble you

Your faults, they can defeat
They measure up to be under 6 feet
You're to good to be with earths grip
The stars will quit when they see your glimpse

Being there on earths moon
Will be good only if I am with you
She is the best thing that I have ever had
I need no oxygen to make all this last
Kaedon
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Kaedon  Wisconsin
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