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When water drove me insaine

Today i was sitting under the shower

and thinking

thinking about all the teenage woes i have

and how the stupidest things can

consume my attention

in the midst of this i had a

moment when my mind

cleared and

just

stopped

thinking.

.

.

.

i focused on the little drops of watter

massaging my skin

this sensation sent a shiver up my spine.

for some reason the widest grin

appeared on my face

i felt as happy as a five year old

i closed my eyes and tilted my head

towards the water source.

the warmth ran down my face.

as the water seeped into my my nose and

between my lips i felt

alsmost as if i were

drowning.

....

when i realised i was being waistful,

i turned the faucet off and became

hypnotized by the steady dripping

id like the believe this event was significant

but i think it only further proves my insanity

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May 27, 2010
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