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a revolution

There is a revolution,

going on in my brain.

A battle

between the thoughts and the feelings

of misinterpreted events and actions

in reality, and state of mind.

Formed by the basic movements,

and uncategorized pattern of the uneven rhythms of your heart beat.

The fluctuating flaming bullets,

of these things that are called words,

coming from a loaded shotgun,

called your brain.

Thoughts gather,

to revolt against the army,

of ample lies

that have taken control of the whole battlefield.

While the truth is overpowered by the lies marching towards them wearing a suit of armor,

but have a very sharp sword

to stab them in the back.

If this was a real battle,

there would be bloodshed

and tears

and torn apart realizations of a reality,

that isn't even there.

Perceptions coming from those who don't exist,

and from those who don't want to.

The hills they march over with the smoking guns

and ammunition, are getting higher and rockier and bumpier,

and the truth can't get past to the other side to attack the lies

But they are already too late,

there are are,

the truth is blindsided,

lies hidden inside bodies and behind friendships

until you are deceived by the actions of the moment and all of a sudden

BAM

A bullet fires out of that shotgun

 

The lies will eventually overpower the truth,

leaving it to bleed out on the battlefield called life,

which will soon become the final resting place.

The revolution, has been lost.

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Written by
dani-2
American
Published
Apr 15, 2013
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Notes

Not quite finished yet, I will repost when finished

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