Hello PoetryVoting

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Vote

Voting-Boards

Home

HomeFollowingInboxNotifications

Read

ReadLiftedFeedsHeartedHistoryMy poemsNew poem

Explore

ExploreOrbitsWordsTagsClassics
Log in
0
Stars
0
Embers
0
Alerts
0
Inbox

Doctor O doctor

Doctor O doctor.

Can you treat me?

This aweful mind refuses to greet me!

 

I'v been having trouble controling my thoughts.

Outbursts of creativity and crazy wandering thoughts.

 

I have work to do and need to concentrate!

But these wandering thoughts have me on stalemate.

The thoughts go here and the mind goes there,

They do not seem to coincide anywhere.

 

Doctor O doctor can you help me?

Bring these thoughts into order,

and let this mind be.

 

It concentrates of war,

it concentrates on pain.

None of which have any prospect of gain.

 

It concentrates on hate,

and the ever growing weight,

Of the population that refuses to wait.

 

No tollerance or patience,

No thoughts on moulding this nation.

Just fights on rights,

And pointing fingers with might!

 

No one looks at their duties,

Or the subtle beauties.

Beauty of diversity, and the numerous entities.

That form our great nation.

All it need is unadulterated devotion.

 

I have work to do and need to concentrate!

But these wandering thoughts have me on stalemate.

The thoughts go here and the mind goes there,

They do not seem to coincide anywhere.

 

Doctor O doctor can you help me?

Bring these thoughts into order,

and let this mind be.

Request permission to use this poem
Written by
kittu
Indian
Published
Apr 15, 2013
Lines·Words
34·207
Permission

Request to use this poem

Tell kittu how you would like to use it. We review requests before forwarding them.

AboutBlogFAQPrivacyTermsContact
© 2009-2026 Hello Poetry/v27.0 by @eliotyork
Explore
Hello PoetryVoting
Write