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Girls too, Women

"He was a young man,

taken before his time."

The TV said.

 

The old man grumbled that

every boy is taken before their time, whatever their age.

He meant himself.

He was sorry for himself.

 

I was not sorry for him so

"Girls too, women," I offered, and at his hurt glance

bristled

because he did not understand why

I would need to mention that.

 

He simply said it again,

every boy is taken--

and I could not convince him.

Nothing remained but this:

I nodded in agreement.

What else could I do?

There are some thing you cannot say

for fear of being offensive.

 

But now, in private, I can tell him,

Where he will not hear me,

that

he should not have been so hasty.

That

no matter what your age,

it might still be exactly your time

or

even

after your time.

 

"You are not owed a life,"

I should have said,

nodding sagely.

At his reddening face

His thickening growl

I would have said it again.

"You are not owed a life."

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Apr 14, 2013
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