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A Song About Being Unable To Write A Song

Its hard to concentrate

When your thoughts rattle around

Like machinegun fire

Caught in complicated clockwork

Trying to captivate

One cognitive idea

About Life

Conglomerate

While the tapestries

Of cliches attempt

To coalesce as they

Cascade

Only to fall away

As they dribble out my ears

The critics are unimpressed.

 

There is no one on this earth

Who is still interested

In simple lyrics backed by

Overwhelming overtures

When the focus is on expenditures

And the bottom line wont budge

 

Its as if it holds a grudge

Torturing visionary artists

Hiding in their closets

From monsters under the bed

And detained by superego authorities

While alone and afraid

Locked in Negative Headspace

 

But the artists becon of light

Is an ironic twist of common life

In a pedestrian plight

Captured on 8mm film

And put on Lifetime.

 

How do you write a song when

The melody is wrong

But the lyrics flow from the hand

Like the last latent ramblings

Of a dying, possessed man

Onto the page as

The imaginary lines fade

And the surreal becomes real

 

And in your head its something you can hear

 

In your gut, its something you can feel

 

But the fingers on the guitar

Cant catch these falling stars

And before we go to far

Its time to take a step back

To breathe

 

The guitar bleeds

But its blood isnt music

And if you turn away you lose it

As the sound gets trapped behind

The saturated limitations of the mind

The brass threads slowly unwind

Only to stab you in the neck.

 

And still,

The critics are unimpressed.

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brass-knuckles-mike
37 / M / American
Published
May 25, 2010
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