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May 2010
With mind in neutral on the train today
I thought about a poem that I'd seen
ten years, four thousand miles, a life away
inside a cheap religious magazine.
The rhymes were forced, the metre was a sham,
the metaphors far-fetched and rather trite,
the feeling shallow-told, yet here I am
remembering the words again tonight.
    I wrote another poem, as a kid:
    another paper bought it for a prize.
    Ten thousand pairs of eyes saw what I did.
    I wonder if, from all those pairs of eyes,
still, somewhere on this planet, I might find
some reader with my poem in their mind.
Written by
Thomas Thurman
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