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Saturn

by iamfreenowitseems

So much dust orbits you Rings of rock fly around your mass Space dust, all collected Into rings of dust and ice and rock So many moons fly around your mass Clinging to the orbit that keeps them from breaking up Your size pales in comparison to the planet before you But your visible rings make you unique So as you float around the sun Dragging ice and dust and rock with you Spare a fleeting thought for those closer to the sun Whose days are shorter Whose years are shorter Whose time is shorter You will be here for much longer than all of us So, when we are gone, spare a thought for us now and then Please, Saturn, it is all I ask
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iamfreenowitseems
16 / F / Victoria, Australia
Published
Dec 10, 2019
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#freeverse#planet#solarsystem#universe#space
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