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Moving on out and up (needs work- suppossed to be a fast paced rhythm not quite there))

Boldly going nowhere fast

Rolling in the fragrant grass

This has-been kid sits on his ***

Waiting for bad **** to pass

Nothing lately comes his way

Out of pocket

No means to pay

He slow starts to slip away

Fading fading like the light

Slipping sliding losing might

Verging deeper

Can not be heard

This young man won't be deterred

This passing phase

Won't phase him out

He'll rise up strong

Without a doubt

Learning lessons the hard way

Because this kid is known to party

This kid known to hit drink hard

But it hit him back

Left several scars

Winded

Wounded

Fighting back

This dark black out

Will be a thing of the past

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Apr 3, 2013
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