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Ashlyn Kriegel
Poems
Apr 2013
Purely
It comes like the first snow:
Quiet, soft, and lovely
As if its descent isn't detected
Until white frost already covers the ground.
It comes like a hurricane:
Rough, agonizing, and raging,
Only to be broken by the eye
But then destroying any remains in its path.
It comes like dusk and dawn:
Short-lived, luminescent, and dancing.
It's when the Earth comes to life
And love springs from its breath.
It dies like the tide:
Its lulling recesion guided
Only by the light
Of the moon.
Tell me your interpretation of this (as I have my own and I want to know if what I am trying to convey is successful.)
Written by
Ashlyn Kriegel
Minneapolis, MN
(Minneapolis, MN)
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