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How The Door Is Locked

by Atul

You stand in front of me seeking knowledge of the unknown. What Door Is Locked, Which Door You Talk About, Atul. Today I Talk About The Doorway To Heaven, But Do You Possess The Credibility Even. This Is A Question - Right? Yeah, This Is A Question... Didn't Sound Like One! Okay, I'm Sorry But You Should Just Answer Me *Heaven is Not a Place Unfamiliar to Me, The Door was Against the Common Notion Black. Heaven is a Place Where Bland Mixtures of Happy, And Sad Emotions Fly Lightly Through Our Minds Unfailingly. Nobody Ever Clearly Remembers of What Heaven Was Like, I Experienced Heaven in The Peace of My Long Comatose State.* But Where Did We Miss Out on The Doorway Part?? Be Patient. Okay, We Would Be... *Good, Now Listen Carefully Without Interrupting Me. Even Though I Missed My Girlfriend, More Did I Miss My College Than I Did Her.* You nod your head and say, It's Obvious, Many Guys Feel So. I shake my head, Not Many Guys Would Feel Exactly The Same & Don't Interrupt Me Please. Seeing you ready to listen more, I comfort my shoulders to continue, *I Missed The Underprivileged Kids More Than I Missed Her, I Missed Imparting Them Elementary Education, I Missed The Feeling of Being Close, Close To The Door Of Heaven, Their Houses In The Slum, The One Close To The College, Seemed Exactly - Actually Like It, The Eternal Doorway To Heaven & I Found It, So Peaceful, Calm And As Much Meaningful To Serve.* I end up my dialogue undisturbed, Yeah, That's The Doorway To Heaven Which I Had Found. You are running a rapid thought process in your mind, Is That It? I smile & Reply, Yes That's It, Thank You. You further ask, But What If We Feel Heavenly Elsewhere, Does It Matter? This time I nod my head and say, It Could Be Anywhere You Feel Happy From Your Heart & Free From All Your Doubts About The Reason's Morality.
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35 / M / Indian
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Written by
Atul
35 / M / Indian
Published
Apr 1, 2013
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3m
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My HP Poem #148

© Atul Kaushal

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