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a bit of the ***** brown

I fancy myself a bit of bourbon

Please do not half read the start

Although both are true

To be clear

I see myself as bourbon

Bourbon is an enigma of magical simplistic complexity

Corn and a handful of other grains

A new charred oak barrel

Time

Same as ATGC (four pieces of the endless puzzle of DNA)

Simple, neat, predictable, and endlessly complex

 

The mash is mostly one ingredient

Corn for bourbon

Family for me

 

The barrel

Oak for bourbon

New Hampshire for me

Both the oak and I are inescapably a product of our land

Slowly grown

Shaped by the environment around us

The char

For bourbon it comes down to how hot and how long

Same for me

Too much char and you risk a bitter end product

Too little and you have a forgettable finish

 

And time

Time is the one you can really control

Even though it seems to be so uncontrollable

You can correct a lot of missteps with time

A little linger in the barrel

Or a little motion while you wait

(Like the paddle boats on the great Mississippi

A gentle rocking to and fro

Echoing the prejazz played on the banks

The rhythmic motion giving birth to something wonderful

But I might as well be talking of woodchucks’ dreams for all my drifting)

A preferred place in the rack house

A little more heat

A place with a breeze

It changes you

It makes you draw more from everything else

With time you make sense of all else

The family into which you were inserted

The land from which you came

The char

Ah yes the char

How hot and for how long

To fully extract the meaning of this takes time

Lots of time

And if you take the time

And you really work to get the most out of all the simple things that really comprise who and what you are

You end with something of infinite complexity

Something that imparts warmth, depth, a hint of sweet, a strength that is apparent, and a finish that lingers leaving you wanting more

 

So to you (and me) I tip a bit of the ***** brown.

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