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So, uh, I have something to tell you...

I was going to write you a poem stating how your sound is

long, and arching like

leaves to the sun. How it

curls and soars like a bluejay taking

wing from an autumn aspen tree

or how it can flit, like a hummingbird

back to the columbines that bloom

violet, and sensual as May

 

…But I felt like a ******* idiot

comparing your sound to birds of all things.

birds are too easy, anybody

can write a ******* poem comparing

a singer’s voice to birds, for godssake that’s too

easy

 

I want to compare your sound to a cigarette, but I’m afraid

that comparison might offend you… what I mean

is that your sound burns

at the end, like

leaves, if you light them, and I breathe it

there’s not a better way to say I

inhale when you sing, and what comes back

out, to the air is an echo, but it looks nice

and in response I wave and clutch at the sky

piteously, but your song

pats my back, with heavy hand and says

that things are fine and good

and your sound

can rasp like flipping book pages

your sound can roll down a grass hill in June your sound

can rope the ****** moon down to where I lie

with stars in my eyes, and nothing on my tongue

 

And like poems about birds, your sound is impossibly easy

but like birds is nigh uncatchable

and, like the moon,

its light is fleeting

and like cigarettes, your sound

is likely killing my insides.

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soluna
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Published
Mar 18, 2013
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