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Life as a Luxury Car Commercial

On our way home

rain along passenger windowpane

after party still stirring me, blurring me

our flesh melds leather

rolling stop gasoline haze

and your finger is in my mouth

adore you a dumb animal for you

over the railroad tracks

and you're vibrating,

I'm transforming, the steering

wheel spinning need you

supine and suggestive smoking

my vices,

the only things I'd give my

vices up are my vices

the sun can wait

the sun can obscure

dwell indulge imprison

please

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jj-hutton
American
Published
Sep 3, 2019
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