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Mar 2013
A tune in the winter wind whistles and rings through

This old forest, humming even in the damp dark

Corners of the coldest cave, bushes shivering slightly

Violently in the air, still and weary eyes of the forest

Watching for signs of a storm, distant rolling rumbling waves

Of sound that drown the tune, scent of smoldering sandalwood

Made from that burning shrine, her garden grave and stricken

From the forest’s heart, silent drops make sadist beating

And drumming songs of pain, giving life to the dead

Memories that they may haunt this forest that grows

Old, set in its ways and keeps its secrets darker, still

So quiet, so mute, begins the morn dawning

Rays of light, warm the forest top, but below

In the misty shade, between giant tree cores

Covered in rough bark, the air remembers

The winter whistle tune.
Two days until the-one-that-got-away's birthday, so the emotional buildup allowed me to write something up. My natural style is rhyme-y; though I decided to use enjambement as my primary structure and threw in a bit of consonance for fun. Lack of strong emotions tends to be my writers block.
Brandon Ruvalcaba
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